徵文比賽



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-16 6:28 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm



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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

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    /sigh, no wonder I wasn't picked! haha.



    On a more serious sidenote, one can only be as witty as the observer.



    And you are still posting too, OT-ing? =p

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    well i'm just off from work

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?



  • extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-16 6:28 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm



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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

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    /sigh, no wonder I wasn't picked! haha.



    On a more serious sidenote, one can only be as witty as the observer.



    And you are still posting too, OT-ing? =p

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    well i'm just off from work

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

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    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-16 6:28 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm



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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

    ===============================================================



    /sigh, no wonder I wasn't picked! haha.



    On a more serious sidenote, one can only be as witty as the observer.



    And you are still posting too, OT-ing? =p

    ===============================================================

    well i'm just off from work

    ===============================================================

    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

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    多努多得~ 有無介紹呀? ^^



  • haha replied at 2012-10-16 10:23 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 12:54 am

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    路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-15 11:58 am

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    時間對於我們的约會不重要,重要是可以令到你開心投入同有興趣再跟我會面,我會找舒服幽靜地方可讓大家輊鬆聊天,談笑風生,我會說一個你有興趣姑事或 topic去聊,引起你興趣探討下去,但我卻會在引人入勝處停下來,好讓你好奇心推使下再跟我會面,至小你不會那麽容易忘記我.

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    評語:果真引人入勝

    40+26+8+8=80

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    內容空洞,根本任何實質既提議都冇,可以攞40?!



    格式,連分段都唔識,可以攞8?!

    故事打成姑事,都重攞8分文法?



    以後版主呢類玩人之thread,大可不理!

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    根本離題!答非所問... 又有錯別字, GRAMMA又唔太正確.



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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

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    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

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    靚女,記得保重身體,女人特別要飲多d營養湯水.當歸紅棗炖雞......



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-16 6:28 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm



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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

    ===============================================================



    /sigh, no wonder I wasn't picked! haha.



    On a more serious sidenote, one can only be as witty as the observer.



    And you are still posting too, OT-ing? =p

    ===============================================================

    well i'm just off from work

    ===============================================================

    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

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    揾多個錢for what?

    揾個rich bf la



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

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    wa! do you need to wake up early in the morning?



    OT til so late must be tire if need to work early. >.<



  • Bibi168 replied at 2012-10-16 10:36 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-16 6:28 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm



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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

    ===============================================================



    /sigh, no wonder I wasn't picked! haha.



    On a more serious sidenote, one can only be as witty as the observer.



    And you are still posting too, OT-ing? =p

    ===============================================================

    well i'm just off from work

    ===============================================================

    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    多努多得~ 有無介紹呀? ^^

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    我公司成日都出ad

    不過唔係度度好做

    我做過另外一度

    D人簡直唔當我係人

    咁我當然唔會講我響邊度做啦



  • ameno replied at 2012-10-17 12:24 am

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============

    靚女,記得保重身體,女人特別要飲多d營養湯水.當歸紅棗炖雞......

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    係味你煲比我先? :)



  • thehelp replied at 2012-10-17 12:30 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-16 6:28 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm



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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

    ===============================================================



    /sigh, no wonder I wasn't picked! haha.



    On a more serious sidenote, one can only be as witty as the observer.



    And you are still posting too, OT-ing? =p

    ===============================================================

    well i'm just off from work

    ===============================================================

    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================



    揾多個錢for what?

    揾個rich bf la

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    我有bf

    Rich唔rich就見仁見智啦

    我覺得女人要有自己ge事業

    男人靠唔住

    只有經濟獨立先至可以有真正自主



  • 早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵



  • feathers replied at 2012-10-17 12:31 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

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    wa! do you need to wake up early in the morning?



    OT til so late must be tire if need to work early. >.<

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    Yes I start work at 9 SHARP everyday



  • Bibi168 replied at 2012-10-16 8:09 pm

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    added~

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    再add過呀唔該...^^

    我啱啱先醒起之前set咗privacy唔接受add request...wakakaka



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-17 12:31 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================



    wa! do you need to wake up early in the morning?



    OT til so late must be tire if need to work early. >.<

    ===============================================================

    Yes I start work at 9 SHARP everyday

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    Good Morning Erica56



  • extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

    ===============================================================

    幾好

    唔知有無得加個鬧鐘function

    呢個帖一更新就響 lol



  • mario524 replied at 2012-10-17 8:15 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    feathers replied at 2012-10-17 12:31 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================



    wa! do you need to wake up early in the morning?



    OT til so late must be tire if need to work early. >.<

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    Yes I start work at 9 SHARP everyday

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    Good Morning Erica56

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    Good morning ;)



  • 生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:14 am

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    Bibi168 replied at 2012-10-16 8:09 pm

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    added~

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    再add過呀唔該...^^

    我啱啱先醒起之前set咗privacy唔接受add request...wakakaka

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    你見唔見到我加你呢?



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    well i'm just off from work

    ===============================================================

    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    我都想揾多個錢呀...下過我OT冇錢嘅...所以日日最遲6pm就走...wakaka



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:09 am

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    Agree replied at 2012-10-17 12:12 am

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    haha replied at 2012-10-16 10:23 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 12:54 am

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    路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-15 11:58 am

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    時間對於我們的约會不重要,重要是可以令到你開心投入同有興趣再跟我會面,我會找舒服幽靜地方可讓大家輊鬆聊天,談笑風生,我會說一個你有興趣姑事或 topic去聊,引起你興趣探討下去,但我卻會在引人入勝處停下來,好讓你好奇心推使下再跟我會面,至小你不會那麽容易忘記我.

    ===============================================================

    評語:果真引人入勝

    40+26+8+8=80

    ===============================================================

    內容空洞,根本任何實質既提議都冇,可以攞40?!



    格式,連分段都唔識,可以攞8?!

    故事打成姑事,都重攞8分文法?



    以後版主呢類玩人之thread,大可不理!

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    根本離題!答非所問... 又有錯別字, GRAMMA又唔太正確.

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    差唔多篇篇都有錯別字

    而且冠軍已經呼之欲出

    我比高少少分鼓勵同學

    大家唔駛口誅筆伐



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:18 am

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    生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:14 am

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    Bibi168 replied at 2012-10-16 8:09 pm

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    added~

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    再add過呀唔該...^^

    我啱啱先醒起之前set咗privacy唔接受add request...wakakaka

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    你見唔見到我加你呢?

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    應該冇...麻煩你delete我再加呀...sorry>•<



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:16 am

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

    ===============================================================

    幾好

    唔知有無得加個鬧鐘function

    呢個帖一更新就響 lol

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    有呀...我幫你寫個script...一有new reply就send email俾你^^



  • extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

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    家陣你曰夜都係度目及住啦...



  • 生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:19 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    well i'm just off from work

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    我都想揾多個錢呀...下過我OT冇錢嘅...所以日日最遲6pm就走...wakaka

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    OT無錢唔會有人理佢



  • 生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:25 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:16 am

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

    ===============================================================

    幾好

    唔知有無得加個鬧鐘function

    呢個帖一更新就響 lol

    ===============================================================

    有呀...我幫你寫個script...一有new reply就send email俾你^^

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    送比滅火做重陽節禮物



  • 生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:20 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:18 am

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    生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:14 am

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    Bibi168 replied at 2012-10-16 8:09 pm

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    added~

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    再add過呀唔該...^^

    我啱啱先醒起之前set咗privacy唔接受add request...wakakaka

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    你見唔見到我加你呢?

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    應該冇...麻煩你delete我再加呀...sorry>•<

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    再唔係你email個msn俾我加你...sorry太耐冇留msn唔記得自己set過乜>_<



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:28 am

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    well i'm just off from work

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    =======================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    我都想揾多個錢呀...下過我OT冇錢嘅...所以日日最遲6pm就走...wakaka

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    OT無錢唔會有人理佢

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    好多人扮勤力架...^^



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:30 am

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    生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:25 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:16 am

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

    ===============================================================

    幾好

    唔知有無得加個鬧鐘function

    呢個帖一更新就響 lol

    ===============================================================

    有呀...我幫你寫個script...一有new reply就send email俾你^^

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    送比滅火做重陽節禮物

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    咁我留返拜山嗰陣先送...



  • 生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:34 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:28 am

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    well i'm just off from work

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    =======================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    我都想揾多個錢呀...下過我OT冇錢嘅...所以日日最遲6pm就走...wakaka

    =====================================================

    OT無錢唔會有人理佢

    ===============================================================

    好多人扮勤力架...^^

    ===============================================================

    我呢度無人扮勤力

    如果好夜都仲響度

    一係paid

    一係堅做唔切d野趕deadline...



  • Good morning Erica!



  • wa, really at work 9 sharp!



    Morning, sexy.



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:28 am

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    生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:19 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 10:31 pm

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-16 10:02 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:33 pm

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    well i'm just off from work

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    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    ===============================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    我都想揾多個錢呀...下過我OT冇錢嘅...所以日日最遲6pm就走...wakaka

    ===============================================================

    OT無錢唔會有人理佢

    ===============================================================



    so good company ah

    nowadays still has OT pay



  • 好緊張豬兄的三小時獎品會係點



  • 豺狼人 replied at 2012-10-17 10:14 am

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    好緊張豬兄的三小時獎品會係點

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    我錯過咗Erica嘅add request >_<



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:16 am

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

    ===============================================================

    幾好

    唔知有無得加個鬧鐘function

    呢個帖一更新就響 lol

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    咁樣妳每次出post我都會出現…



    我怕妳會嫌我煩… 見到我覺得都厭 喎…



  • 火哥咁早就口花花呀



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:30 am

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    生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:25 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:16 am

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    extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 8:13 am

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    早晨呀! 妳咁早既

    一早矇矇鬆鬆就見到妳, 真係醒一醒呀… 呵呵

    ===============================================================

    幾好

    唔知有無得加個鬧鐘function

    呢個帖一更新就響 lol

    ===============================================================

    有呀...我幫你寫個script...一有new reply就send email俾你^^

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    送比滅火做重陽節禮物

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    妳對我咁好既… 以後呢個節日我都會紀念妳…



  • 生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 10:27 am

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    豺狼人 replied at 2012-10-17 10:14 am

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    好緊張豬兄的三小時獎品會係點

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    我錯過咗Erica嘅add request >_<

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    再ADD返就得啦



  • 文度王 replied at 2012-10-17 10:48 am

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    火哥咁早就口花花呀

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    我廿四小時都係呢個狀態架…



  • extinguisher replied at 2012-10-17 10:57 am

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    文度王 replied at 2012-10-17 10:48 am

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    火哥咁早就口花花呀

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    我廿四小時都係呢個狀態架…

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    所以幾時都話火哥係我偶像



  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:41 am

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    生肖屬豬 replied at 2012-10-17 8:34 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-17 8:28 am

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    well i'm just off from work

    ===============================================================

    乜做到咁夜先收工架?

    平時都係咁夜架?

    =======================================================

    一時時啦

    做夜d揾多個錢

    ===============================================================

    我都想揾多個錢呀...下過我OT冇錢嘅...所以日日最遲6pm就走...wakaka

    =====================================================

    OT無錢唔會有人理佢

    ===============================================================

    好多人扮勤力架...^^

    ===============================================================

    我呢度無人扮勤力

    如果好夜都仲響度

    一係paid

    一係堅做唔切d野趕deadline...

    ===============================================================



    做邊行可以講少少嘛



  • 差唔多篇篇都有錯別字

    而且冠軍已經呼之欲出

    我比高少少分鼓勵同學

    大家唔駛口誅筆伐

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    多謝老師鼓勵,唔明點解得我篇文有這麽大迴響,氣量大的人真得很難找......



  • 路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-17 12:12 pm

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    差唔多篇篇都有錯別字

    而且冠軍已經呼之欲出

    我比高少少分鼓勵同學

    大家唔駛口誅筆伐

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    多謝老師鼓勵,唔明點解得我篇文有這麽大迴響,氣量大的人真得很難找......

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    不如你作多篇文俾佢地睇....題目就叫 " 假如葡萄不是酸的" XDDD



  • 路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-17 12:12 pm

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    差唔多篇篇都有錯別字

    而且冠軍已經呼之欲出

    我比高少少分鼓勵同學

    大家唔駛口誅筆伐

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    多謝老師鼓勵,唔明點解得我篇文有這麽大迴響,氣量大的人真得很難找......

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    6字頭嗰啲唔會有人話太高分啩...@@"



  • 路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-17 12:12 pm

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    差唔多篇篇都有錯別字

    而且冠軍已經呼之欲出

    我比高少少分鼓勵同學

    大家唔駛口誅筆伐

    ---------------------------

    多謝老師鼓勵,唔明點解得我篇文有這麽大迴響,氣量大的人真得很難找......

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    我只得老師一人回應 我都好慘下呀



  • 篇文己將3小時計劃寫得好请楚,地方,心情,氣氛,話題,行動一一列出,還解釋點解要這樣做,連預期結果寫好清楚,這都叫離題,問非所答?有時文章需要意會,現在我不是交計劃書



  • 路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-17 2:23 pm

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    篇文己將3小時計劃寫得好请楚,地方,心情,氣氛,話題,行動一一列出,還解釋點解要這樣做,連預期結果寫好清楚,這都叫離題,問非所答?有時文章需要意會,現在我不是交計劃書

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    你啱啱嚟呢個forum...???

    啲人係咁架....`食飽飯冇屎疴咪周圍攪人囉...



    我喺she手仔都冇拖過隻都做咗壯士啦...

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    你咪咁認真啦...^^



  • 路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-17 2:23 pm

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    篇文己將3小時計劃寫得好请楚,地方,心情,氣氛,話題,行動一一列出,還解釋點解要這樣做,連預期結果寫好清楚,這都叫離題,問非所答?有時文章需要意會,現在我不是交計劃書

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    唔駛介懷咁多既

    你寫都係為左開心下過下癮啫

    其他人抱咩心態去睇, 並唔重要…

    而且學你話齋, 呢個地方, 欠氣度既人太多喇…



  • extinguisher 4:10pm oct 17, 2012路過女孩 replied at 2012-10-17 2:23 pm

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    篇文己將3小時計劃寫得好请楚,地方,心情,氣氛,話題,行動一一列出,還解釋點解要這樣做,連預期結果寫好清楚,這都叫離題,問非所答?有時文章需要意會,現在我不是交計劃書

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    唔駛介懷咁多既

    你寫都係為左開心下過下癮啫

    其他人抱咩心態去睇, 並唔重要…

    而且學你話齋, 呢個地方, 欠氣度既人太多喇…

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    我覺得有得比賽下



    又可以交流下..又可以練下中文



    都幾過癮





  • erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 9:30 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 6:13 pm

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    Derek replied at 2012-10-16 4:39 pm

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 12:26 pm

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    Derek replied at 2012-10-16 11:05 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 12:45 am

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    erica56 replied at 2012-10-16 12:44 am

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    Derek replied at 2012-10-15 11:24 am

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    If I have a 3 hours dating with Erica,



    before that dating happens, i gotta have a haircut, etc, etc so as to ensure i am at the top performance as usual, a stylist decent guy. i'll reserve a window seats in Four Seasons Hotel Blue Bar for our intimate casual chatting. if clicks come luckily and naturally, we can plan together for our next wild date. this three hours are mainly for knowing each other’s more deeply, whatever topics will do. it then gotta be a milestone/memory for our intimate relationships starts.



    when the time is almost up, i will escort you home, have a nice dream then. last but not the least, i anticipate you, Erica will wear heels and perfumes, act elegant , friendly and slim enough to seduce my heart.

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    Comments: Interesting story. You can also include more details about the date itself. For example, description of yourself, the environment, your feelings.

    34+23+7+7=71

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    description of myself, the environment, my feelings, etc? no way, dear, we never meet therefore how can i write that without any hints? anyway have a nice day host.

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    Use your imagination :)

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    thanks but i am not as young as you to have that sort of imagination. btw, you refer to a guy able to write excellant meant he's longlasting, hard n attrative? roflol.

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    For me, the ability to communicate always comes first.

    While many would choose to be with an A&F model with excellent male endowment over an ordinary looking guy with wit, I prefer the latter.

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    at last, I

    i found yr word (the ability to communicate) so mature. nice to meet you host =D



  • host



    i wonder y dun u write something about yr anticipated 3 hours 2inspire us?


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